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THE CLAIMING OF
NICOMAINE
Prologue
Ever since Nicomaine was a child, she has always dreamt to
be a princess and with one prince charming to sweep her off her feet. She grew
up in a loving household with parents that catered to her every whim. Even if
she was spoiled, she turned out to be a sweet and caring young girl.
Her father was a merchant and would always be away in
business. Whenever he would return from his travels, he always brought her
gifts—a small trinket and if she’s lucky, a new book which she usually consumes
within the day. Her mother taught her how to play the pianoforte. Though her
small hands cannot master the complex pieces of Beethoven, she can certainly play
enough to impress her Mama, and hopefully, a future husband.
She treasured those times that she had with her mother. Not
only was she taught how to play a musical instrument, she also learned how to
cook under her Mama’s tutelage. Together with the kitchen staff, they would
roll up their sleeves and bake pies which they would devour amidst joyful
laughter and teasing. It was a happy household but one that is not meant to
last.
In the middle of her tenth autumn, her mother passed away
due to a lingering consumption. Her father, who was away in business at that
time, hurried home to see his daughter in a nearly catatonic state.
After grieving and burying his wife, he nursed his daughter
back to her former self; not as bubbly or happy as before but she learned how to smile again. He
took a sabbatical from his travels to focus on Nicomaine.
In the mornings, he would read to her until she finally grew
impatient and started reading on her own again. In the afternoons, he would
take her out at the meadow behind their house and she would bask under the warm
afternoon sunshine. She would chase the butterflies until her feet would grow
tired and her arms weary from grabbing the insects. Her father would relish his
daughter’s laughter but he knew that something was missing. Nicomaine will soon
be a young lady and he cannot give her the guidance that she would need.
Seeing that his daughter is fully recovered, Nicomaine’s
father resumed his travels. While he’s away, he would send her presents through
mail. Eight years after her mother’s demise, she received a parcel containing
her recently requested tome with a note that her father will be home in a
fortnight and that she should expect guests.
Nicomaine then hurried to get the house ready. She requested
the servants to open and air out the rooms as her father’s missive noted that
he will be arriving with three other persons. On the morning of his expected
arrival, she excitedly dressed in her favorite dress and hurried down when she
heard the carriage arrive. She stood at their front door eyeing the coach and
ran when she saw her father step down. She lurched to a stop when she saw him
assist a lady down the steps.
Her father smiled when he saw her. Bringing the newcomer
next to him, introductions were made, “Nicomaine, I want you to meet your new
stepmother.”
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